Something bothers me about this landscape and I can’t put my finger on it.
I started off based on a photo, so the coast line is pretty accurate, except that there was a tree in the foreground which I thought was taking focus off the real star here: the sea and the multiple coast plans that keep perpetuaiting in the horizon until it melts in the mist of the sea.
I’m also happy with the way the mountains disappear in the clouds with a kind of a pinkish halo, I think that came out quite realistic. The clouds are quite realistic in my opinion, and absolutely love the little ray that goes down on the middle coast.
Now enough with the things I like about it, there are many things I don’t like. First, the foreground if too big – the big part in black below. I didn’t really know what to do with it, and I kind of just left it there. I’m not very happy with the middle chain of mountains eiter – I guess they look much better than what I had initially drawn, but there’s something I could have done better – especially in the part where the land meets the sea.
Finally, I should have studied more the sea, but I don’t feel too sure of myself with some of the photoshop tools, so I guess I will just have to keep practicing. One thing I will try next time is to use textures and the lasso – which apparently really help with the lighting and controling what is modified and what is not.
I used several brushes, mostly however I used this set of dry-oil brushes: https://sellfy.com/p/GomE/. You can kind of see the edge of the brush on top of the middle mountain range.
I’ve also used quite a lot the dodge and burn tools, colour / hue / saturation adjustments. No liquify tool this time though 🙂 The final touch was a layer of pink (something like this) which I applied in overlay only on the upper half of the painting. This made the sky look grey and grim, while the sea was left vibrant, since in my head this was a local storm (in the background you can notice that the light really brightens up and slides under the clouds carried by the moisture. So the storm just passed, the clouds are going away and we see the first ray of light coming through the clouds.
All that is missing here is a trireme making its way to a little port somewhere on the coastline 🙂 and perhaps a hoplite or two mounting guard in the foreground. Okay, I might work this landscape more !